Ibuki Mioda
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Post by Ibuki Mioda on Aug 21, 2018 1:30:08 GMT
im kinda biased in saying i like my artist buuut the poet would be my second choice anyway
the other two are too out there or too bland tbh
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Post by Chihiro Fujisaki on Aug 21, 2018 1:48:55 GMT
I think the main things left to do are: 1. Make sure we're 100% happy with names and final drafts for Drag Racer & Taste Tester 2. Get a third one into good enough shape that we're happy with it
My rewrite:
Name: Asami Hirose Talent: Ultimate Painter Quote: "Mistakes are just a myth!" Bio: From smearing food all over the table to creating messy, yet cute crayon drawings, Asami has always had a knack for the arts. As she became older, she gradually invested more and more time into this natural talent, gradually refining it into one single expertise: painting. Her absolute love for this vibrant art form became a thing of almost obsession. By the age of 10, she was competing with adults in terms of painting skill, and easily winning cash prizes from multiple age-based contests, bolstering her pride. But, she was always searching for the perfect subject to make a masterpiece out of. Her most recent and famous painting of a cityscape has been compared to the likes of Picasso or Van Gogh!
I... was going to try to work with the archer one after this but we're short on time, so posting this for now.
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Post by Kirumi Tojo on Aug 21, 2018 1:51:11 GMT
Need to have Asami as the first word in the bio if rolling with that.
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Post by Chihiro Fujisaki on Aug 21, 2018 1:53:21 GMT
Name: Yuti Nakazawa Talent: Ultimate Drag Racer Quote: "Taste the rubber!" Bio: Yuti once stole his parents' car at the young age of 4, immediately crashing it. The thrill of the crash should have traumatized him, but instead spurred a desire to go faster than ever before. A natural born thrill seeker, Yuti took every opportunity he could to race, claiming that he would never back down from a challenge. By the age of 16, Yuti had become an online sensation drag racing with his modified Trueno 86. Limited only by the cash needed for a better vehicle, he decided to take to drift battles until he can one day become king of the drag racing circuit!
Name: Julien Deschamps Talent: Ultimate Taste Tester Quote: "Too much salt!" Bio: Julien loves one thing: food. Growing up in his family's restaurant he discovered the ability to pick out certain ingredients from dishes when he noticed the new quiche recipe had too much egg in it. From that day onward whenever a new recipe was to be introduced, his parents asked him to make sure it was perfect. The restaurant soon grew in fame, and attracted travelers from all around the world. With the restaurant's newfound fame, Julien became a sort of culinary icon for his ability to dissect difficult flavors within any dish presented to him. This led to chefs coming to the restaurant in an attempt to stump his taste buds, but if you ask him, you need to stump more than his tongue!
Name: Himari Itō Talent: Ultimate Poet Quote: "Poems are just written dreams." Bio: Himari has always been a painfully shy girl. She grew up preferring a quiet life of reading, writing and dreaming instead of toys, games and parties. She started writing short stories at an early age, and as she got older she found she really enjoyed poetry. The way she could express herself with not just the words themselves but their shape and flow was mesmerizing! In an effort to be supportive, her parents began secretly submitting some of her works to poetry journals and magazines, hoping the recognition would help her come out of her shell. Her poetry was a hit and she starting being discussed as a future Poet Laureate. When Himari found out she was furious and ran away, only to be dragged back home by her vengeful father who was enjoying the extra income. She's since burnt everything she's written as soon as it's done.
I don't have a strong opinion personally on whether Poet or artist is more likely to show up and would appreciate input. I think we should definitely use the Himari Itō name somewhere even if we don't use Poet; I think it's our most convincing name.
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Post by Kirumi Tojo on Aug 21, 2018 1:54:15 GMT
Bio: Asami has always had a knack for the arts. Her early childhood was filled with vibrant, and sometimes messy drawings. As she became older, she gradually invested more and more time into this natural talent, gradually refining it into one single expertise: painting. Her absolute love for this vibrant art form became a thing of almost obsession. By the age of 10, she was competing with adults in terms of painting skill, and easily winning cash prizes from multiple age-based contests, bolstering her pride. But, she was always searching for the perfect subject to make a masterpiece out of. Her most recent and famous painting of a cityscape has been compared to the likes of Picasso or Van Gogh!
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Post by Chihiro Fujisaki on Aug 21, 2018 1:54:36 GMT
Need to have Asami as the first word in the bio if rolling with that. Sure. Name: Asami Hirose Talent: Ultimate Painter Quote: "Mistakes are just a myth!" Bio: Asami has always had a knack for the arts, from smearing food all over the table to creating messy, yet cute crayon drawings,. As she became older, she gradually invested more and more time into this natural talent, gradually refining it into one single expertise: painting. Her absolute love for this vibrant art form became a thing of almost obsession. By the age of 10, she was competing with adults in terms of painting skill, and easily winning cash prizes from multiple age-based contests, bolstering her pride. But, she was always searching for the perfect subject to make a masterpiece out of. Her most recent and famous painting of a cityscape has been compared to the likes of Picasso and Van Gogh!
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Post by Chihiro Fujisaki on Aug 21, 2018 1:55:25 GMT
We can use yours.
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Post by Kirumi Tojo on Aug 21, 2018 1:55:55 GMT
I just realized that would have two sets of japanese style names whereas there was a more ecclectic group of names in the provided bios? I think they were all different nationality?
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Post by Kirumi Tojo on Aug 21, 2018 1:56:21 GMT
Ok, which three are we going to lock down then.
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Post by Chihiro Fujisaki on Aug 21, 2018 1:56:56 GMT
I just realized that would have two sets of japanese style names whereas there was a more ecclectic group of names in the provided bios? I think they were all different nationality? Could be in our favor; they might think one is real and one is fake. But it's a fair point that most of the names were ... variable, not necessarily Japanese
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Post by Chihiro Fujisaki on Aug 21, 2018 1:59:42 GMT
Name: Yuti Nakazawa Talent: Ultimate Drag Racer Quote: "Taste the rubber!" Bio: Yuti once stole his parents' car at the young age of 4, immediately crashing it. The thrill of the crash should have traumatized him, but instead spurred a desire to go faster than ever before. A natural born thrill seeker, Yuti took every opportunity he could to race, claiming that he would never back down from a challenge. By the age of 16, Yuti had become an online sensation drag racing with his modified Trueno 86. Limited only by the cash needed for a better vehicle, he decided to take to drift battles until he can one day become king of the drag racing circuit!
Name: Julien Deschamps Talent: Ultimate Taste Tester Quote: "Too much salt!" Bio: Julien loves one thing: food. Growing up in his family's restaurant he discovered the ability to pick out certain ingredients from dishes when he noticed the new quiche recipe had too much egg in it. From that day onward whenever a new recipe was to be introduced, his parents asked him to make sure it was perfect. The restaurant soon grew in fame, and attracted travelers from all around the world. With the restaurant's newfound fame, Julien became a sort of culinary icon for his ability to dissect difficult flavors within any dish presented to him. This led to chefs coming to the restaurant in an attempt to stump his taste buds, but if you ask him, you need to stump more than his tongue!
Name: Himari Itō Talent: Ultimate Poet Quote: "Poems are just written dreams." Bio: Himari has always been a painfully shy girl. She grew up preferring a quiet life of reading, writing and dreaming instead of toys, games and parties She started writing short stories at an early age, and as she got older she found she really enjoyed poetry. The way she could express herself with not just the words themselves but their shape and flow was mesmerizing! In an effort to be supportive, her parents began secretly submitting some of her works to poetry journals and magazines, hoping the recognition would help her come out of her shell. When Himari found out she was furious, but by then the damage had been done: her poetry was a hit and her name was being discussed as a future Poet Laureate.
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Post by Kirumi Tojo on Aug 21, 2018 1:59:43 GMT
excellent.
edited post to agree
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Post by Chihiro Fujisaki on Aug 21, 2018 2:00:12 GMT
Lol well, one of those is the final answer
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Post by Chihiro Fujisaki on Aug 21, 2018 2:00:42 GMT
Oh ok cool. Hope that works out, let's smash part 2 of this
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Post by Kirumi Tojo on Aug 21, 2018 2:00:59 GMT
Man creative challenges are ridiculous.
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Monomi
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Post by Monomi on Aug 21, 2018 2:10:21 GMT
Name: Yuti Nakazawa Talent: Ultimate Drag Racer Quote: "Taste the rubber!" Bio: Yuti once stole his parents' car at the young age of 4, immediately crashing it. The thrill of the crash should have traumatized him, but instead spurred a desire to go faster than ever before. A natural born thrill seeker, Yuti took every opportunity he could to race, claiming that he would never back down from a challenge. By the age of 16, Yuti had become an online sensation drag racing with his modified Trueno 86. Limited only by the cash needed for a better vehicle, he decided to take to drift battles until he can one day become king of the drag racing circuit! Name: Julien Deschamps Talent: Ultimate Taste Tester Quote: "Too much salt!" Bio: Julien loves one thing: food. Growing up in his family's restaurant he discovered the ability to pick out certain ingredients from dishes when he noticed the new quiche recipe had too much egg in it. From that day onward whenever a new recipe was to be introduced, his parents asked him to make sure it was perfect. The restaurant soon grew in fame, and attracted travelers from all around the world. With the restaurant's newfound fame, Julien became a sort of culinary icon for his ability to dissect difficult flavors within any dish presented to him. This led to chefs coming to the restaurant in an attempt to stump his taste buds, but if you ask him, you need to stump more than his tongue! Name: Himari Itō Talent: Ultimate Poet Quote: "Poems are just written dreams." Bio: Himari has always been a painfully shy girl. She grew up preferring a quiet life of reading, writing and dreaming instead of toys, games and parties She started writing short stories at an early age, and as she got older she found she really enjoyed poetry. The way she could express herself with not just the words themselves but their shape and flow was mesmerizing! In an effort to be supportive, her parents began secretly submitting some of her works to poetry journals and magazines, hoping the recognition would help her come out of her shell. When Himari found out she was furious, but by then the damage had been done: her poetry was a hit and her name was being discussed as a future Poet Laureate. This is your final submission, correct?
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Post by Yasuhiro Hagakure on Aug 21, 2018 2:11:49 GMT
That's the one.
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Post by Yasuhiro Hagakure on Aug 21, 2018 2:12:12 GMT
I guess Chihiro didn't like my last edits oh well
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Monomi
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Post by Monomi on Aug 21, 2018 2:15:06 GMT
Did you have a tiebreaker submission? If not, uh, give me one asap pls.
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Post by Kirumi Tojo on Aug 21, 2018 2:15:49 GMT
Tiebreaker: 789
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Monomi
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Post by Monomi on Aug 21, 2018 2:16:02 GMT
Cool.
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Post by Chihiro Fujisaki on Aug 21, 2018 2:23:57 GMT
I guess Chihiro didn't like my last edits oh well It was my idea to try take it in the more dramatic direction and in the moment I just felt better about the one closer to your original that we'd had the most eyes on so I dug it back up? Like besides from you I don't think there was any feedback on if that was a good change or not
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Monokuma
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Post by Monokuma on Aug 21, 2018 2:25:28 GMT
From the masterminds:
Name: Melani Leo Talent: Ultimate Graffiti Artist Quote: "Spray, spray, then run away!" Bio: Melani just wants her voice to be heard. Down with the system! The way she fights back is through her art. With a few cans of spray paint and her gas mask, she becomes a vigilante, spreading her message all over town with a mural of amazing quality. She is fast, too, and works best under cover of night. The police have caught her once, but she's not afraid. She won't rest until she brings about change the only way she knows how.
Name: Nazeem Redmond Talent: Ultimate Firefighter Quote: "Fight fire with water!" Bio: Nazeem grew up in a firehouse surrounded by firefighters. His father, a single parent, often kept him in the firehouse whenever he needed to be on call and couldn't get someone to watch him. Nazeem did not mind; at first he loved sliding down the pole, but then he quickly learned all the duties of a firefighter just by watching them, and he spent his time working out in order to become stronger. He ran up stairs over and over, practiced putting on the gear, and even learned how to operate the hoses. His father took notice of his abilities and took him under his wing. Soon he was riding on the truck, helping with the hose, the ladder, and gear. Nothing beats helping to save lives, and Nazeem looks forward to working with his father after school is over.
Name: Frida Allepi Talent: Ultimate Breakdancer Quote: "Break it!" Bio: By day, Frida is a wealthy heiress to a quilt conglomerate. But by night, she sneaks out of her home to meet up with her friends and is a breakdancing sensation! Living a double life and keeping the other secret has been stressful, but it has only fueled the fire and she has spent many a night practicing her spins and her stances. Her parents are suspicious, but they are also never home. She fears rejection from her crew if they find out how much she's worth. That doesn't stop her from surreptitiously giving a helping hand whenever she can. No one is quite sure why she and her friends are so lucky when they have to pay for something like medical expenses, but they just keep on dancing.
Name: Barry Cedric Talent: Ultimate Pyromaniac Quote: "Time to burn things..." Bio: Barry liked to play with matches as a kid, mesmerized by the flame and and enthralled by the power the heat had. No one paid much attention to him anyway, so he got away with it. Soon he was lighting fires in the alley behind school, or setting off fireworks in the dead of night at the park. As he got older, he not only became more daring, but more knowledgeable. In a quantum, he can turn any spark into a roaring fire, on any surface, with any materials. He is proud of his ability, which almost seems preternatural. However, he ultimately does not have control of the flames, so he does his best to be careful.
Name: Lindsay Zilch Talent: Ultimate Beekeeper Quote: “Say Bees!” Bio: Lindsay grew up on her grandfather’s honey bee farm. She loved the sweet and delicious taste of honey from a young age. As she got older, her grandfather taught her how to make honey and take care of the bees. Sometimes she'd get stung by the bees, learning quickly that she shouldn't annoy them. Regardless, she persisted, learning to love the bees and make them love her. Since she started training, the farm has tripled its production! Every night before she sleeps, she pours some honey in her tea and sits on her patio while enjoying the buzz around her.
Name: Delia Thompson Talent: Ultimate Florist Quote: "Flower power!" Bio: Delia works in her family's flower shop before she goes to school and helps close it up. Her cheery personality belies the emotional strain on her from her parents' marital problems. Trying to avoid them, she buries herself in work. The only time they seem calm and stop fighting is when she shows off her floral arrangements. She always brings an artistic touch and makes them so quaint and beautiful. Flowers do seem to have a soothing effect on her family. Hopefully she can keep them all together!
Name: Emmett Hayes Talent: Ultimate Ventriloquist Quote: "You talking to me?" Bio: Emmett never had many friends as a kid. He spent many days alone on the playground talking to his imaginary friends, but then he got a ventriloquist dummy for Christmas. Soon he found solace in creating different personalities and characters as his dummy collection grew. After showcasing his newfound talent at the local talent show, he became a lot more popular. Soon after, he began performing for various government officials and celebrities, including the Prime Minister! His shows sell out everywhere he goes, and he's even preparing for an international tour. He loves all of his dummies, but his favorite will always be his first.
Name: Quinton Crisp Talent: Ultimate Crabber Quote: "Don't get crabby!" Bio: Quinton likes to spend his free time on the water, checking on his crab pots in the ocean. An excellent swimmer and boater, he feels most at home on the water. He is also an excellent chef when it comes to seafood, and he could eat fish and crab for every meal. His road to becoming a crabber was a rough one, as he has no history of crabbing, fishing, or boating in his family. He has to drive or be dropped off at the shore, an hour away from home. Still, he is quite determined to catch the most, while being sustainable. He hopes to become a member of a fishing expedition to the Arctic as soon as he is old enough.
Name: Albert Griffin Talent: Ultimate Dentist Quote: “Open Wide!” Bio: Albert grew up with a fascination for teeth. Most people hated going to the dentist, but it was Albert’s favorite time of the year! His love of teeth followed him into his teen years where he studied up on everything he could to learn more about he strong, ivory bone. Whether it was a molar, incisor or cuspid, if it was in the mouth, Albert knew all about it! He never understood why so many people in the world could go without flossing their teeth every day! He was determined to change the world, and clean the mouths of millions, so Albert opened up his own dentistry office. One by one, he would save the world. One by one, mouths would be cleaned.
Name: Donna Lipiski Talent: Ultimate Ultimate Player Quote: "You never know if you don't throw!" Bio: Ultimate! Donna loves tossing a frisbee around. She's got good power behind her throw, and she always hits her target. Growing up, she spent her days rain or shine tossing the frisbee back and forth with anyone she could. An avid frisbee golfer and discus thrower, she is a quintessential athlete. But her true love is the sport of ultimate frisbee. Nothing beats tossing that plastic disc into the wind.
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Post by Yasuhiro Hagakure on Aug 21, 2018 2:27:54 GMT
Ultimate Ultimate Player haha
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Post by Kirumi Tojo on Aug 21, 2018 2:28:31 GMT
Ultimate Ultimate Player haha My initial thought as well.
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